I'm done....I don't want to let too much out on an open forum (maybe edit the critiqued entries later?), anyway
Ouch

I love the module, awesome job.
Library room
"They find that no books that radiate magic" - extra that
I did not check for logic consistency (stating the locations, such as the northeast corner) and cross referencing rooms, etc. No obvious slip ups and that is extraordinary these days...thanks.
I think the only step left is for us all to gather some 'poor unsuspecting souls' and run'm through the module

Good work and I look forward to the next masterpiece...didn't Halaster say something about July 4th?

LeSong