Pyramid of Despair

Website · Post by **Tawnos76** » Mon Dec 13, 2010 5:41 pm

I now have the second draft done of my module.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/wlglqd7cf ... espair.pdf

Please let me know what you think.

2nd draft up

Post by **Mira** » Tue Dec 14, 2010 7:30 am

I like it

Should take the players quite some time to get through it if they manage to survive it. Mostly looks like a few spelling errors and formating issues would clean it up to a more 'professional' quality.

Mira (Things work better if you plug them in)

Website · Post by **Tawnos76** » Tue Dec 14, 2010 10:05 am

I will fix those errors and try to make sure the formatting is correct. Always a few things you miss in a first draft.

My players had survived but I had sent them down their with at least 2 raise scrolls with the cleric and they did get used.

Post by **Varl** » Tue Dec 14, 2010 12:36 pm

Cool adventure Tawnos! Thanks. The Dwarf Crusher is going to be fun.

Post by **Halaster Blackcloak** » Wed Dec 15, 2010 1:37 am

Tawnos, I haven't had a chance to read it all through, but just skimming it, it screams "kick ass"!

Did you want me to upload it to the BIP downloads page? Does that sentence even make any sense?

Website · Post by **Tawnos76** » Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:53 pm

You can put it on the downloads page for everyone.

If anyone wants to draw up a cover art for it I will add that to the PDF as well.

Website · Post by **Tawnos76** » Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:15 pm

I added some cover art to pdf.
I used the Back in Print scroll if that is OK

http://www.mediafire.com/file/jwyci0ar1 ... espair.pdf

Sun Sep 09, 2018 10:49 pm

Well I was finally able to add this to the downloads page! Good god we're behind the times!